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The Dungeon

Haiku

By Cathy holmesPublished 2 months ago β€’ Updated 2 months ago β€’ 1 min read
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A collapsed sea cave,

Beaten blue by ocean waves.

I ask, did it hurt?

nature poetry
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Cathy holmes

Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.

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  • Jordan Twiss2 months ago

    An excellent take on the beauty and danger of nature.

  • Tracy Willis2 months ago

    So much said in just a few words. Love!

  • Andrei Z.2 months ago

    One can think of it that nature is cruel (and it is, am I wrong?), But also that's the way how things evolve, gain their shape, and experience. We should withstand the pain. I wouldn't ask the cave if it hurt (it did), I'd offer my hand :)

  • Roxanne Barbour2 months ago

    Lovely words. Enter more in the challenge.

  • enjoyed this one. ty

  • Harmony Kent2 months ago

    I love this! πŸ’•πŸ™‚

  • Love the beaten blue and did it hurt! Your first haiku is the best among your five!

  • Paige DePoe2 months ago

    beautifully written ! :D

  • Bhagirath Roy2 months ago

    What a beautiful write up of a really lovely, heartwarming life story! Thank you, Erica, for hosting and asking exactly the questions that popped into my mind, and thank you, Dane, for sharing your story with us. I can’t wait to go read it πŸ₯° https://vocal.media/theChain/6-benefits-of-investing-in-cryptocurrencies

  • Lovely Masterpiece!

  • Thayrile2 months ago

    Nice πŸ‘

  • Antoinette L Brey2 months ago

    I gave it a heart as well

  • Kendall Defoe2 months ago

    I gave it a heart. A very clever look at geological phenomena!

  • Jason Basaraba2 months ago

    Love it , this is awesome

  • Misty Rae2 months ago

    Congratulations on the top story! Excellent work!

  • C. H. Richard2 months ago

    Congratulations on top story! Love the last line, something to think about.

  • Melissa Ingoldsby2 months ago

    This is absolutely beautiful 🀩 amazing

  • This was wonderful ❀️ and congratulations on the top story!!

  • Keila Aartila2 months ago

    This is awesome! And congrats on Top Story!

  • Congratulations on your top story , well deserved

  • Gina C.2 months ago

    This is amazing; I love how you ask the earth if it was hurt by the ocean. There is something magical about that. πŸ’™

  • Oneg In The Arctic2 months ago

    Absolutely loved this, one of the best I’ve read so far

  • Blake S2 months ago

    Love the verbiage!

  • J. R. Lowe2 months ago

    Oooh I like this one. Ending with a question is a nice touch! Very vivid 😍

  • Caroline Jane2 months ago

    Oh that is so good. Empathy with nature. Fab haiku.

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