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The Breakers Motel

paradise lost

By Randy BakerPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Top Story - January 2024
The Breakers Motel
Photo by Anton Mishin on Unsplash

The name is, perhaps, misleading,

suggesting more pleasant scenes

than the gritty panorama one sees

when passing through Ocean View.

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At one time it had been

family friendly, a nice place

where decent citizens came

to spend a weekend, splashing in the surf.

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A smattering of motels remain,

grim shells of their former selves,

interspersed among the 7-Elevens,

liquor stores and pawn shops.

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This one is my favorite

and I’ve lived in a few.

It’s as much a refuge

as a place of business.

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Hookers don’t bring their tricks home

and the dealers hawk their wares

somewhere else, not right here,

though neighbors sometimes rate a favor.

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The water still laps at the shore

mere yards away, behind us,

but you’d be crazy to swim in it,

or cross that no-man’s-land that was once a beach.

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Street View would be a better name.

That’s where the real focus is

these days. The sidewalk displaced the boardwalk.

Carnival atmosphere morphed into freak show.

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I sit outside in my lawn chair

if it’s not too hot, from the weather or the cops,

checking the action on the boulevard,

thinking how strange things look

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cast in the glow of the neon sign,

flickering like a homing beacon

for the wayward soul,

offering the only hope available in these parts.

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Vacancy.

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About the Creator

Randy Baker

Poet, author, essayist.

My Vocal "Top Stories":

* The Breakers Motel * 7 * Holding On * Til Death Do Us Part * The Fisherman

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    Written by Randy Baker