The Big Green Hill
A Kiss Good Night
No static baby
All clarity maybe
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Bopping our heads in time to Sir Duke
And you are so cute to boot
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If I could weave perfection into every word I say
I would sing it in a such a lilting way
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Mr. Blue Sky is such a good listen
I love seeing how your eyes glisten
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Day is night and night turns into day
The time is right I hope you say okay
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But all I have to give is the moon
Baby come here and let's croon
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The lights are out the stars are bright
Let's roll down that big green hill with a kiss good night
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"Sir Duke" by Stevie Wonder is a great head boppin' song... check it out... 😎
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"Mr. Blue Sky" is such a good listen!!!
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This is kind of a new poem form I accidentally created. It is seven unique two line poems (which combined create a 14 line poem). Each of the seven two line poems rhyme. The theme of this style poem is optimistic, happy, inspiration, positive, with a little humor. The seventh two line poem must signify the end or closing of the larger 14 line poem.
I'm not sure what to call this poem form... well maybe we can call it the Happy Seven???!!! 😎🤪
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With Love, RHC ❤️
About the Creator
Rick Henry Christopher
Writing is a distraction to fulfill my need for intellectual stimulus, emotional release, and soothing the bruises of the day.
The shattered pieces of life will not discourage me.
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I love how creative this piece is and how positive the tone is as well. I like the name Happy Seven! Nice work!
Great job congratulations
I enjoyed this poem and the Stevie Wonder music clip
Fabulous!!!!!!!!
Poetry formulas are like algebra to my brain. But I did think your poem was rhythmic and mood-setting fun!
Beautiful poem, Rick. Great music!
Lovely!
Goodness, Rick, that was fun. Love the cadence of the poetry. I am not great at writing poetry but to even think about creating a new style is mindboggling! Well done!!!
Inspirational and loving it!!!♥️♥️💕
Rick, I like how you are trying new things and your artistic part is shining through. The image of rolling down a green hill at night is beautiful.
Always inventing new things and keeping it positive! As with so many creators here, I've had trouble picking one from your work to immortalize in the comment thread of my CREATION MYTH, but here is one which speaks to the heart and the mind, so it is as good an intro to RHC as any! https://vocal.media/poets/creation-myth-m8dm0x8d
THis was hilarious - not your poem form, that was great - actually maybe this is part of WHY its great - after you mentioned bopping heads, I realised at the end I had been bopping my head to the rhythm of the poem the rest of the way through!
Anything better like creating a new form of poem. 😁 I love that image. It has a Van Gogh’s Starry Night style in tune with Starry.ai - What would Vincent think about it?! That image is just another interesting and thoughtful creation.
I liked the style, RIck. and I loved the title picture.
Inspirational, creative style to beat with music 🎶🎧💜
This is beautiful, uplifting and so creative!!! 👏🏻💚