Temptation Redemption
Resisting Microfiction
Introduction
I see the current Vocal Microfiction Challenge as a temptation to share a hundred words of mine. This is about the struggle to stop myself from writing another short-form story.
This villanelle is quite flippant about my desire not to write another microfiction story for the current Vocal challenge.
The music is "Temptation" by New Order
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It Is Only A Hundred Words
A Quick Vocal Challenge Entry
But My Stanzas Are So Absurd
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I Could Write A Tale To Be Fair
The Form's Quite Elementary
It Is Only A Hundred Words
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I Try Really Hard With My Work
Creative Mode: Sendentary
But My Stanzas Are So Absurd
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I Need To Write More, Show Some Flair
Pick Text From My Inventory
It Is Only A Hundred Words
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This Temptation, I Am Aware
Should Have A Stop Sign: No Entry
But My Stanzas Are So Absurd
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My Stories I'm Trying To Curb
Friends Are So Complimentary
It Is Only A Hundred Words
But My Stanzas Are So Absurd
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Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Compelling and original writing
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Original narrative & well developed characters
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Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Comments (9)
I love all your fiction and microfiction. You can write as many as you want and I would read it!
That's about how I feel! It's so difficult, when I'm used to writing thousands of words at a time, to create something so short. But I gave it three chances and I'll be satisfied with it. Truly a creative work, Mike!
Nicely written! Good job!
Hey! Great job! 😀
I barely understand how to write a short story. I am leaning towards micro fiction as a prose poem story… but still nothing
Awesome work❤️💯😉
Nicely done! Now I'm conflicted.
Impressive!!! Loving it!!!💖💖💕
Love it, especially since now I know what I'm looking for in a villanelle!