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Talking in the park

A life story

By Luke FosterPublished about a month ago โ€ข 1 min read
Second Place in Time Capsule Haiku Challenge
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Talking in the park
Photo by Bruno Martins on Unsplash

Here you are, my friend

Take a seat upon this bench

Tell me how it ends.

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About the Creator

Luke Foster

Father. New husband. Wannabe writer.

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  • AGB3 days ago

    Loved it. Very powerful, so much to be said. Congratulations!

  • C. H. Richard6 days ago

    Reread this one several times. I love it! Congratulations โค๏ธ Well done!

  • Mariann Carroll6 days ago

    Beautiful ๐Ÿ˜

  • PK Colleran6 days ago

    I really love the inviting nature of your poem and a special moment of time that it conjures with an old friend of many years. Simply beautiful.

  • Robbie Cheadle6 days ago

    Congratulations on your placing. A wonderful haiku.

  • Holly Pheni6 days ago

    This is beautiful! Congratulations, well-deserved!

  • Heather Hubler7 days ago

    Congratulations on the challenge placing!! I loved this one from the start :)

  • Congratulations. Lovely image.

  • Loryne Andawey7 days ago

    Oh this is profound! Congratulations on your second place win!

  • Susana's World7 days ago

    love this! Congrats!

  • Oh. Wow. This little poem is beautiful. Sounds like it could almost be a snippet from a song. Thank you for this.

  • CJ Miller7 days ago

    This, appropriately, has a real vintage feel to it. I can picture these lines in a classic novel or movie. Excellent job. ๐Ÿ’œ

  • Akii7 days ago

    Congratulations โœจ๐ŸŽ‰ ๐Ÿ€โœจ https://vocal.media/education/what-i-do-when-i-fail

  • Madison Newton7 days ago

    Love this one, congrats!

  • Ahna Lewis7 days ago

    Congrats! Very well done!

  • Congratulations on your Win!!!

  • Gerald Holmes7 days ago

    This hits the concept of time beautifully. Congrats. Well deserved.

  • Very simplistic and elicits many emotions, especially hope and nostalgia.

  • Gal Mux7 days ago

    Very evocative! Wow!

  • Caroline Jane7 days ago

    Congratulations. Love the easiness within this. Well done.

  • Gurulathan S7 days ago

    Congratulation Luke

  • Just love this. Congratulations

  • JANE AYU7 days ago

    Congratulations

  • Lucas Rae7 days ago

    Handful of words. Tells a lot. Good writing.

  • Congratulations ๐ŸŽ‰ โœจ๐Ÿ€

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