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Talking in the park

A life story

By Luke FosterPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Top Story - March 2023
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Talking in the park
Photo by Bruno Martins on Unsplash

Here you are, my friend

Take a seat upon this bench

Tell me how it ends.

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About the Creator

Luke Foster

Father. New husband. Wannabe writer.

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  • Mackenzie Davis8 months ago

    Stunning, absolutely stunning. I adore the slant rhyme, the melancholic end, the truth in how life happens to us all.

  • AGBabout a year ago

    Loved it. Very powerful, so much to be said. Congratulations!

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    Reread this one several times. I love it! Congratulations ❤️ Well done!

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    Beautiful 😍

  • PK Colleranabout a year ago

    I really love the inviting nature of your poem and a special moment of time that it conjures with an old friend of many years. Simply beautiful.

  • Robbie Cheadleabout a year ago

    Congratulations on your placing. A wonderful haiku.

  • Holly Pheniabout a year ago

    This is beautiful! Congratulations, well-deserved!

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Congratulations on the challenge placing!! I loved this one from the start :)

  • Maureen Colleran Batteyabout a year ago

    Congratulations. Lovely image.

  • Loryne Andaweyabout a year ago

    Oh this is profound! Congratulations on your second place win!

  • Susana's Worldabout a year ago

    love this! Congrats!

  • Sarahmarie Specht-Birdabout a year ago

    Oh. Wow. This little poem is beautiful. Sounds like it could almost be a snippet from a song. Thank you for this.

  • CJ Millerabout a year ago

    This, appropriately, has a real vintage feel to it. I can picture these lines in a classic novel or movie. Excellent job. 💜

  • Akiiabout a year ago

    Congratulations ✨🎉 🍀✨ https://vocal.media/education/what-i-do-when-i-fail

  • Madison Newtonabout a year ago

    Love this one, congrats!

  • Ahna Lewisabout a year ago

    Congrats! Very well done!

  • Stephanie J. Bradberryabout a year ago

    Congratulations on your Win!!!

  • Gerald Holmesabout a year ago

    This hits the concept of time beautifully. Congrats. Well deserved.

  • Thavien Yliasterabout a year ago

    Very simplistic and elicits many emotions, especially hope and nostalgia.

  • Gal Muxabout a year ago

    Very evocative! Wow!

  • Caroline Janeabout a year ago

    Congratulations. Love the easiness within this. Well done.

  • Gurulathan Sabout a year ago

    Congratulation Luke

  • Manpreet Singh Bhinderabout a year ago

    Just love this. Congratulations

  • JANE AYUabout a year ago

    Congratulations

  • Lucas Raeabout a year ago

    Handful of words. Tells a lot. Good writing.

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