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Maldives would be fine by me

By MissclickedPublished 10 months ago 1 min read

Take me somewhere for a few days

days where we try new ways

ways of life that we never persuade

persuade only the things we like

like an adventure on a bike ride

ride below and the heights

heights that we were afraid to climb

climb the uncertain peaks of life

life that was build for dancing slow

slow does our time passes by

by the time we all wake up in a lie

lie that we all gonna be fine

fine knowing it was our take

take me somewhere for a few days




WRITER'S NOTE: Heyaa everyone! I tried a new style of poetry as I previously read a beautiful piece of work by Jazzy Gonçalves called ''Take your place in time''. Although it was hard to write (no idea how she did it effortlessly) yet I have still tried it, do share your views in the comment section and let me know if I could improve in any way. I have linked her work please give it a read. TAKE CARE!

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Comments (8)

  • Babs Iverson10 months ago

    Awesome!!! Love it!!!♥️♥️💕

  • Poppy 10 months ago

    Very very cleverly written!

  • Jazzy 10 months ago

    Here is your episode https://vocal.media/01/episode-3-poems-on-human-experiences

  • EYHCS10 months ago

    This was great - looking forward to your next attempts. These were some of my best lines: "heights that we were afraid to climb climb the uncertain peaks of life"

  • Jazzy 10 months ago

    Your first attempt? You're kidding me this was so great! Can I read this on the podcast???

  • Alexander McEvoy10 months ago

    This was your first attempt? The poem is beautiful! You carry so much emotion in so few words Brilliantly done :)

  • Omggg you made this format look so easy! You nailed this! Loved this beautiful poem!

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