I am surrendering to you.
The rush of passion is overwhelming.
I'm giving in to you.
I desire you.
I am surrendering to you.
The feelings I have for you is overwhelming.
I'm giving in to you.
I desire you.
I am surrendering to you.
Being near you is overwhelming.
I am giving in to you.
I desire you.
I am surrendering to you.
The sound of your voice is overwhelming.
I am giving in to you.
I desire you.
I am surrendering to you.
The feeling of your touch is overwhelming.
I am giving in to you.
I desire you.
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Danielle Mosley
I've enjoyed writing and reading ever since I was in grade school. I'm looking forward to making a career out of my talent as a writer. If you like any of my articles be sure to share them and leave me a tip. Any type of support is great!
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Poem is reflecting one of the most beautiful feelings in the world. Loved it.