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breathing in deeply
air crisp, high summit attained
forever magic
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Judey Kalchik
It's my time to find and use my voice.
Poetry, short stories, memories, and a lot of things I think and wish I'd known a long time ago.
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Comments (7)
Looking up your profile and this Haiku popped up. Stunning.
Wow 🤩
Beautiful piece.
Excellence! I could feel the mountain air hitting my lungs!
Oh, I felt the magic with this. Excellent work :)
Seventeen perfect syllables
Fantastic!