My heart is over the moon, bright stars adore.
When time slows down, sweet glance is love close by.
Winter comes to an end and our spirits soar.
Singing sea and the music plays, a love sigh.
In the grass, warmth lies still and sweet, we met.
Now gone, the cold lonely wind blows a change.
Carefree breezes embrace those who do not fret.
The heart is one, a new rush surge, not rage.
Pure love so sweet, the air blossoms for thee.
Quickly, the sun rays spread a kiss, doth wait.
The sweetness is real and simple, you see.
A day at the seashore, swimming so late:
Blooms to celebrate the special reason.
That Summer should be our secret season.
About the Creator
Babs Iverson
Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.
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Comments (47)
The feelings and sentiments in this are pure beauty as an expression of love. Well done!
Lovely work!❤️
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This is a great story. I enjoyed this story.I just published a new story . If you want to read my story then visit this link https://vocal.media/motivation/eternal-serenade-a-love-story-painted-by-the-sea
That last line is so beautiful! I could feel the love while reading your words!! ❤️
Absolutely beautiful poem.
that's so sweet. I could feel the emotions that I knew ran through the veins of my son and his wife. this is great. brings back memories.
Wonderful poem! Could sense the emotion throughout!
Such a beautiful poem <3
Beautiful ❤️
Lovely, beautifully flowing poem!
absolutely gorgeous
This was a lovely poem!
Nice!! Heartfelt and relatable Babs😊💕
great thank u for give me wonderful reading experience keep it up
This is beautiful ✨
lovely summer:^^
Babs, I love your descriptive language and use of personification when describing nature. You have it such a beautiful romantic feel and I enjoyed it! Great work Babs!
Well executed sonnet, full of warmth and exuberance. Excellent form!
This brought me back to my teenage summers on Tybee Island. You really painted a breathtaking, vivid picture!
So sweet! 🥰
This poem captures the essence of young love and summer romance.
Beautiful and amazing Babs!
Your romantic poem is like a symphony of emotions, flowing gracefully through each line.The way you weave words together paints a vivid picture of love's beauty and captures the essence of the heart's longing. Would you be interested in swapping stories and giving each other feedback