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Sugar Plum

A free verse poem

By Talia DevoraPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
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Sugar Plum
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When I see you

with my own

two cerulean eyes,

my mouth begins

to water

incessantly.

When I talk to you,

about all these

chapters of my life story,

I feel like

I’m speaking

to a real-life messenger.

When I see your

strawberry cheesecake truffle eyes

pop out and squint,

it makes me

want to stuff my face

with white chocolate dipped strawberries.

When I hug you

with my caring arms

and shiny, smooth hands,

I automatically get

a free touch of

human softness.

Whether I’m here or not,

you’ll always be

my sugar plum.

I’ll always taste

a massive spoonful

of your sweetness.

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Talia Devora

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  • Tiffany Gordon 11 months ago

    Amazing piece! So Full of passion & sweetness! Nicely done Talia!

  • This is sweet 💖😊

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Awesome!!! Left a heart💖💕

  • Wonderful words

  • sleepy drafts2 years ago

    I love this! This is so beautiful and sweet! <3

  • I loved this!

  • Thank you! I so enjoy poetry!

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