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Satin liquid flowing over lumpy rocks.
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Seamless silver water gracefully flowing oceanward.
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Sleek, glossy liquid within the banks.
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Glassy surface reflecting the surrounding forest.
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Undulating water flows to smoother surfaces.
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Sinuously moving along like a snake.
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Comments (6)
Beautiful piece.
Oooo, satin, glossy, glassy, sinuously! That was soooo smooth! Loved your poem!
Very smooth💗💖
I got the snaky vibes from the beginning. Nice. I have a boa in one of mine. Thay are smooth creatures.
Very smooth vibes.
Great idea for a flowing river! Smooth peaceful and meditative! ☺️👍