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"You want a robot?"
New thoughts break apart my circuits.
"I’m not a machine."
About the Creator
Lindsay Sfara
I'm just a daydreaming nerd writing poetry and fiction about mental health.
Follow my novel journey and more: linktr.ee/lindsaysfara
"Not all those who wander are lost" - J.R.R. Tolkien
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Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
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Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
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Comments (5)
Brilliant! That last line- I want to scream frequently throughout the working day!
Well done! I'm not very good at haikus, so I am always impressed by those who seem to have a handle on that form.
That last line packed a punch! Loved your Haiku so much!
Oof, this is a short yet profound piece. An incredibly effective haiku. Some days it's hard not to feel like we're competing with machines.😭 Thank you for writing and sharing this. 💗
This is a Haiku for the modern age, Lindsay. Very thought provoking. I definitely need to give it time to ruminate.