a far universe
revolts against the dark side
the force is with them
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This is in response to Judey Kalchik's Haiku Book review Challenge.
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Lamar Wiggins
Creative writer in the Northeast US who loves the paranormal, mystery, true crime, horror, humor, fantasy and poetry. Take a chance, you'll be thoroughly entertained.
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I First Saw Him
When I first saw him sitting on the wall, relaxed and looking out over the water, I was sure he wasn't a local. Not including children, there are only about 250 or 300 of us in this area full-time, though that number is ten-fold in the summer, and I know everyone at least by sight or by family resemblance. And yet, the way he sat looked familiar and started my mind sorting and discarding among the families I knew, not quite like this one, not quite like that one.
By Natalie Wilkinson7 days ago in Fiction
Comments (16)
May the force be with you! Loved your Haiku-review!
Fantastic! I especially loved the last line!
Awesome 👍 well Done💯❗
Short sweet and accurate!
Fantastic haiku! I love Star Wars and you got it right! Great work Lamar!
Simple, straightforward, & pretty much complete. Much like the poem the puppet recites in the preview for the movie magic, covering pretty much everything without giving anything away.
That was great!!!
I imagined hearing the words spoken with your voice, which of course, I've never heard. Thus, with a few words and an image, you created a little magic! 🪄✍️
Oh yes, the force! 🤗❤️ Amazing poem - bam! Nailed it! 🤗❤️
Yep!!! Short & sweet!!! Loved it!!!
Yeah!! Exactly correct. well done.
Nailed it!!
OMG! I don't know how anyone can do this! LOL! This was great!! :)
Lol my kids name is Cassian, so I love this! 🖤
Perfection!
Awesome choice Lamar!