Sonnets Squared
bimetered poems in the Petrarchan scheme

Love poems inspired by the Short & Sweet challenge (though I'm inelligible).
Dedicated to R. Angeli, a master of musical variations, prose poems, and sonnet forms, both old & new.
I.
the note I sent
to sow the seed
to want, to need
I know not how it went
the love I’d lent
my soul to feed
you tore and rent
but I will come if you will lead
for you I’ve bled
the pain of love
your head I’d turn
a word not said
that I’ve need of
for you I’d burn
II.
your head I’d turn
for you I’ve bled
a word not said
for you I’d burn
his wage to earn
when Amor has fled
with wind wing sped
from Jove as erne
the note I sent
to sow the seed
you tore and rent
my soul in deed
I know not how it went
but I will come if you will lead
III.
to sow the seed
the note I sent
I know not how it went
my soul in deed
to want, to need
the love I’d lent
you tore and rent
but I will come if you will lead
for you I’ve bled
for you I’d burn
the pain of love
the word not said
your head I’d turn
that I’ve need of
IV.
the pain of love
for you I’ve bled
a word not said
that I’ve need of
like bolt of Jove
when Amor had fled
with wing wind sped
and dart to die of
the note I sent
to sow the seed
you tore and rent
my soul in deed
I know not how it went
but I will come if you will lead
About the Creator
Halston Williams
Eternal Student: literature, poetry, history, art, and philosophy. English Teacher. Writer & painter. Traveller & skier (when there's $$$). I'm young enough to be foolish, yet old enough to know better. Lover of dark & beautiful things.
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Love the rhyming and it flowed so well, great piece :)