song in capricorn
hard paths don't have to mean lonely journeys
By sleepy draftsPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
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peak in sight, steps slow
bodies clung to rugged roads
together, we climb.
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sleepy drafts
a sleepy writer named em :)
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Comments (12)
This made me think of the alpinst
Beautifully crafted!
I love this ❤️ Together, we face the obstacle 😊 Great work!
I love this.
OH, this is a good one!
Oh wow this was lovely! I just subscribed:)
There is so much truth in this poem! The hardest of roads is best traveled with a trusted friend who can help you up when things get difficult. Loved it!
It's almost an entire story right in the poem. Well done!
Love it, Beautiful visual from 3 lines ❤️
Loved the short, yet arduous adventure. ⛰
oofta. loved everything about this. <3
Loving nature & inspirational haiku!!!