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song in capricorn

hard paths don't have to mean lonely journeys

By sleepy draftsPublished 3 months ago • 1 min read
song in capricorn
Photo by Claudio Schwarz on Unsplash

peak in sight, steps slow

bodies clung to rugged roads

together, we climb.

nature poetryinspirational

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sleepy drafts

a sleepy 26-year-old named em :)

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  • Just._.Meg 9 days ago

    Beautifully crafted!

  • Gina C.2 months ago

    I love this ❤️ Together, we face the obstacle 😊 Great work!

  • I love this.

  • Dana Stewart2 months ago

    OH, this is a good one!

  • Oh wow this was lovely! I just subscribed:)

  • Brittany Miller2 months ago

    There is so much truth in this poem! The hardest of roads is best traveled with a trusted friend who can help you up when things get difficult. Loved it!

  • Call Me Les2 months ago

    It's almost an entire story right in the poem. Well done!

  • C. H. Richard3 months ago

    Love it, Beautiful visual from 3 lines ❤️

  • Max Russell3 months ago

    Loved the short, yet arduous adventure. ⛰

  • Morgana Miller3 months ago

    oofta. loved everything about this. <3

  • Babs Iverson3 months ago

    Loving nature & inspirational haiku!!!

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