While you were sad, somebody noticed
While you were glad, somebody noticed
While you were good, somebody noticed
While you were bad, somebody noticed
You never go through life alone
While you were strong, somebody noticed
While you were weak, somebody noticed
While you speak, somebody noticed
While you were wrong, somebody noticed
You never do it alone
How you felt, somebody noticed
Where you dwelt, somebody noticed
How you loved, somebody noticed
When you wept, somebody noticed
You never endure alone
While you cried, somebody noticed
When you lied, somebody noticed
When you cooked, somebody noticed
How you looked, somebody noticed
When you died, somebody noticed
You never exist alone
About the Creator
Susan Wilkins
I write stories and poetry. Lately I have put up a science fiction story and a children's story. I love to write and Vocal has given me a platform to do that. P.S. I love reader comments! Let me know what you think. Please enjoy!
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