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Somebody Noticed

Never Alone

By Susan WilkinsPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
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Windblown - Artist: Susan Wilkins

While you were sad, somebody noticed

While you were glad, somebody noticed

While you were good, somebody noticed

While you were bad, somebody noticed

You never go through life alone

While you were strong, somebody noticed

While you were weak, somebody noticed

While you speak, somebody noticed

While you were wrong, somebody noticed

You never do it alone

How you felt, somebody noticed

Where you dwelt, somebody noticed

How you loved, somebody noticed

When you wept, somebody noticed

You never endure alone

While you cried, somebody noticed

When you lied, somebody noticed

When you cooked, somebody noticed

How you looked, somebody noticed

When you died, somebody noticed

You never exist alone

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About the Creator

Susan Wilkins

I write stories and poetry. Lately I have put up a science fiction story and a children's story. I love to write and Vocal has given me a platform to do that. P.S. I love reader comments! Let me know what you think. Please enjoy!

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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    Zero grammar & spelling mistakes

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