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Soft, Pillowy Cubes of Decadence

I Love You, Marshmallows

By Paul StewartPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Soft, Pillowy Cubes of Decadence
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Is there such a thing as too many marshmallows?

Marshmallows - that beautiful mixture of cornflour, icing sugar, liquid glucose and gelatine

Gelatine to give it that springy spongy consistency

Spongy consistency that makes it feel like you are biting into a cloud

Cloud flavoured with vanilla or strawberry

Strawberry and vanilla need to be eaten in two

Two at a time, one of each or two of one

One marshmallow is never enough

Enough is too finite a word to describe marshmallows

Marshmallows never lie or make you cry

Cry - something I often do when I run out of marshmallows

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Marshmallows - I love you, you soft, pillowy, sweet cubes of decadence.

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Thank you for reading. As if it wasn't clear - I love marshmallows.

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Paul Stewart

Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.

Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.

"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson

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  • Rick Henry Christopher about a year ago

    What a fun and crazy read. I love it. Digging deeper this poem is actually craftily and cleverly put together. It is not just a bunch of words about marshmallows haplessly thrown together you actually put some thought into this. Very good job here.

  • Donna Reneeabout a year ago

    Nope. Nope nope nope. “springy spongy consistency” 🤣. It’s so funny to me that the things about marshmallows that appeals to most people are the things that makes me nauseous hahah. That light dusty coating. Oh my. Gotta go read the donut one again to feel better 🤣🤣❤️

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Yum, yum, yum!! This was so fun! And now we all know your weakness...hahahah. I also saw what you did there by taking the last word of each line and using it for the first one of the next :)

  • Omggg, I love marshmallows tooooo! Loved your yummy poem!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Hee hee. This is great fun. Now get back to work.

  • Holly Pheniabout a year ago

    That was awesome. I'm feeling a food series coming on...

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