
She slipped away while I was en route, flying cross-country, my head bowed in sorrow, quietly sobbing
An easy touchdown belied my troubled heart . Anxiety gripped me. I tried to shoulder my way to the plane’s exit door , but a woman in front of me checked my rush, ending hopes of a quick exit from the plane, but
- If she had not, would I have made it in time to say goodbye?
Should I have screeched, ‘My mother is dying, let me out?’
A brother collected me and drove us, and another brother met us
we wept
**
Lying peacefully on hospital sheets,
a gentle smile uplifted her lips, smooth and serene lips
I stroked the back of her hand,
awed
at the exquisite softness of her skin
I ran my fingers over her velvety , sleek and elegant hands
that had loved me, raised me
and amazed me with her artistry.
**
I sat lightly stroking the tops of her hands,
soothing touches filling
my heart
and my memory,
helping me
say goodbye
Copyright © 8/16/2025 by Andrea O. Corwin
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