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Singing Bon Jovi

Doesn't it move you

By Antoinette L BreyPublished 23 days ago 1 min read
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Singing Bon Jovi
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Watching , observing

As the singer floats away lost

My camera snaps

My hips sway

And I see the lawn chairs

And try to hide my desire

to move my body and dance

One hip

the other

oops I did not do that right

But noone sees

I have no desire to be seen

As the older crazy lady

but I can't just sit

I want to move

to get the groove

Isn't that why

god gave us rhythm

Other wise we'd be a

birthing baby's tin man

with no ability to get in the mood

For Fun
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About the Creator

Antoinette L Brey

I am an elder in a time of freedom. I am now retired. All i want to do is have fun. Without a daily routine, my imagination is one of my only salvations. I am not planning on writing a book, it is just for my own pleasure

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  • Tiffany Gordon 22 days ago

    Fantastic!

  • Older crazy lady hahahahaha. Loved your poem!

  • Great poem!

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