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By Brian Wong Published 3 months ago 1 min read

a quiet stream

continuously quiet

Course through everybody's face

Adolescence, childhood, youth...

passed me quietly

A couple of recollections of the past remain

like stones settled at the lower part of the water

Also, the boat has disappeared

Simply some incomprehensible despairing

Returning discreetly in the restless evening

Energy is doused, the country is forlorn

waterway bit by bit evaporating

The riverbed with mismatched gorges is uncovered on the temple

Silently telling the spending years

Mental Health

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Brian Wong

Hello, I'm Brian Wong , a 29-year-old aspiring writer dedicated to weaving captivating stories that resonate with the depths of human experience.

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  • Bew3 months ago

    Amazing congratulations, can you read mine also?

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