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By Pauline FountainPublished 3 months ago Updated 2 months ago 1 min read
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Earth, sun and moon align and the experience excels my expectations.

Celestial trancendense engulfs me.

Loss expected by you about my blindness is misaligned and devoid of insight.

I am sightless, yet do not underestimate me.

Perceptions of your own constructs of the five senses do not apply to me.

Some may assume this overshadows and diminishes my rapture.

Enhanced and unique; my sensory pathways outshine.


My other entry for the ‘In Eclipse’ Challenge is below:

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About the Creator

Pauline Fountain

Writing and photography provide a creative outlet to reflect with meaning on my life.

My mental health? Bipolar 1 (Rapid Cycling), Complex PTSD and Functional Neurological Disorder.

My son’s gentle wisdom furnishes me with the gift of hope.

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  • Novel Allen2 months ago

    The wonders of the universe will always leave us in awe and leave us marveling at the maker of our magical world. We so need to cherish mother earth. Beautiful awe inspiring words.

  • Babs Iverson2 months ago

    Brilliantly expressed and love it!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Beautiful and indeed inspirational!

  • Grz Colm2 months ago

    👏 “do not underestimate me”! Love that. 😊

  • Nice entry

  • Gosh this was magnificent! Loved your Acrostic!

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