Shower Star
An Acrostic
Don’t judge me.
I’m just dancing in the shower.
Swinging my hips to the beat.
Throwing my arms into the air.
Releasing my inner pop star—
At my own sold out concert.
Crying fans reaching out in the front row.
Trying not to slip or lose my grip—
In between all of these acts…
Objective achieved!
Not ending this distraction by any means.
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Message Me Afterwards
>That was a bad idea. I thought you knew… >Oh, the pathos! I don’t really know you as well as I should. In fact, I may not know the real you at all. That essential, sparkling you that you only reveal to a select few. Had I been paying more attention to the stories you are so fond of telling, in which you are invariably author, narrator and protagonist, I would not have been so foolish as to set you up on a blind date. After all, no friend has ever done anything of the kind for another. That’s preposterous. What is a friend, really?
By D. J. Reddall7 days ago in Fiction
Comments (4)
Haha this played out right in front of my eyes... Outstanding!
Lol, I'm definitely guilty of this! Loved your relatable acrostic!
This was great! A very relatable piece, something I’m sure many people have allowed themselves to get distracted with.
Love it! (Dancing in the shower AND your entry.) 😉 🍀