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Shedding Demons

A Haiku

By Real PoeticPublished 6 months ago 1 min read
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Shedding Demons
Photo by Emiliano Vittoriosi on Unsplash

Pressing delete to

shed demonic vibrations

ruining my peace.

Dark voice, disappear.

You were never welcome here.

But, thanks for the test.

surreal poetryperformance poetry
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Real Poetic

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  • Stephen Kramer Avitabile5 months ago

    Oh, loved that! Powerful and with such a great message!

  • ThatWriterWoman6 months ago

    I think this may be my favorite work from you Real. It's so optimistic and powerful! Well done!

  • Donna Fox (HKB)6 months ago

    I love this! It's so powerful and jarring, yet inspiring! The mood of it feels like "come at me b*tch" as though you're challenging your inner demons to come up with better temptations because you're stronger than even they know! Beautiful work RP!

  • This was so deep and powerful! I loved it!

  • Ohhhh great work with this 👌👌👌

  • Mother Combs6 months ago

    great haikus

  • Tiffany Gordon 6 months ago

    I heard that RP! Get 2 steppin' lol

  • Cathy holmes6 months ago

    This is great. I especiially love those last 2 lines.

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