Pressing delete to
shed demonic vibrations
ruining my peace.
Dark voice, disappear.
You were never welcome here.
But, thanks for the test.
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The last time I laughed so hard that my belly hurt was ___________ Rupi Kaur's Gratitude Writing Prompts When I was 24 and going to a women's support group we would laugh, I would go home with a sore face and sore sides. Why? I wasn't used to smiling or laughing. After a few months of doing that, I never have a sore face, sides, or belly from laughing as I laugh enough.
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Oh, loved that! Powerful and with such a great message!
I think this may be my favorite work from you Real. It's so optimistic and powerful! Well done!
I love this! It's so powerful and jarring, yet inspiring! The mood of it feels like "come at me b*tch" as though you're challenging your inner demons to come up with better temptations because you're stronger than even they know! Beautiful work RP!
This was so deep and powerful! I loved it!
Ohhhh great work with this 👌👌👌
Very nice.
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I heard that RP! Get 2 steppin' lol
This is great. I especiially love those last 2 lines.