I can think whatever I like
You can
My internal world is my sanctuary
It is
Nobody can see inside my head
No
My mind is free
I see you
About the Creator
Caroline Jane
Warm-blooded vertebrate, domesticated with a preference for the wild. Howls at the moon and forages on the dark side of it. Laughs like a hyena. Fuelled by good times and fairy dust. Writes obsessively with no holes barred.
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After childhood years spent listening to these stories at the feet of Nana Belle, great aunts and great uncles, this part (my part) became both easy and hard. Easy when you grow up to become a writer. Hard knowing the oral traditions steeped in a history vast enough to eclipse the oldest mariner’s voyage are in danger of being lost simply because no one sits still to listen anymore.
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Comments (10)
This poem feels like the beginning of an epic horror film. Great entry!!
Oooh the ominous comfort of empathy… loved this
Wow wow such an opening of mind!
What a stunning display of brevity in action...I feel accidentally targetted a little lol. Is this how it comes across? eek. lol. Well done, Caroline.
Really excellent!! I think I am the invasive empath…
Powerful reflection on the freedom and privacy of thoughts...
I guess empathy can feel intrusive!
So true, your thoughts is certainly your sanctuary ♥️👍🏽
Oooo, the length of this poem may be short but it was soooo deep! I loved it!
A thought -provoking and thought shaping poem ! I enjoyed the essence of personal freedom in the poem .