If you would like to check out the prompt for this awesome unofficial challenge, here it is!
Whisper to me your darkest of secrets
With your ethereal words of purple velvet
Teach me how you do it so
Tell me one more time I'm yours to hold.
Bring me to that quiet place
Hypnotized by your exotic serenade
Drinking you in, unable to escape.
A being of my most taboo dreams
Playing my heart and all its strings
Wounded lover, this I am
My body, a treasured foreign land.
A cascade of euphoric falls runs down my thighs,
Taking me to the highest of highs.
A labyrinth for you to dive in deep
Forever you are my enigma,
My secret to keep.
About the Creator
Tressa Rose
On a serious self-discovering, soul-searching journey. Breaking myself out of a stagnant shell and reaching out for my dream of being a writer. Small steps but this is my start! Please help me by commenting your feedback, I'd be grateful!
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Comments (9)
Very sensual indeed! Feeling a little warm here and the heating's not on.
Hilariously, I read your last line as "forever you are my v..g...na.' instead of enigma. Sorry!!! it was funny. A lovely poem Tressa. Hey, your poem is erotic.
I loved how sensual this was.
Well done! Rose
Oooo, this was so elegant, sensual and hauntingly beautiful! Loved your take on this challenge!
You maximized the sensuality of the words given in the prompt, and Iām here for it! This was naughty & nice. š©·
There's a sort of contraction and expansion in the rhythmic scheme that I adore. Keep it up!
Lovely secret that you keep. š„°š„°
Wow Tressa this poem is amazing! Great take on the prompts, sensual and beautiful