Seasons of Love
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Young eyes meetâtheyâre sold!
Unsure smiles, sharp inhalesâhold
Spring steps, farewell cold.
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Hands togetherâmold
Nice breeze, sand glistening gold
Will promises hold?
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Seasoned steps, phones scrolled
Flames goneâembers, story old
Now, what else be told?
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Frigid nightsâso cold
Tsunami! Will spirits hold?
Rainbow dreams resold.
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Sneha Pradhan
Storyteller. Dreamer. â¨
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Beautiful and I really love that last line! đ
Awesome.
Fabulous!!!đđđ
Lovely storytelling in this!!
A beautiful poem of love
Nicely done :)
I find it amazing that you captured the nuance of young love in such succinct and beautiful way. You have a gift for words and meter. WELL done!!
This was so lovely and very beautifully written!
Wow great job, following the relationship straight thru, nice work đ
Wow !
This is lovely. Well done.
Ahh, could feel the phases of that relationship so well. Great emotion in this, wonderful work :)