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Silent Suffering

By Misty RaePublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Trigger warning: The following deals with Depression and may not be suitable for some readers. If you're in crisis please call Wellness Connect Canada 1-866-585-0445.

Sinking slowly,

Silent suffering,

Sensing Sereton slip,

So, so, sad.

Shrouded secrecy.

Synthetic smile.

Senseless, stubborn shame,

So, so sad.

Smothering solitude

Scared,

Scarred,

Sore,

So, so, sad.

sad poetry
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About the Creator

Misty Rae

Retired legal eagle, nature love, wife, mother of boys and cats, chef, and trying to learn to play the guitar. I play with paint and words. Living my "middle years" like a teenager and loving every second of it!

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  • Alexis Knightabout a year ago

    So deep and very relatable, very well written, I'm sure this speaks to a lot of people the same.

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    Excellent

  • Sadly, every line of this was very relatable. I'm so glad you wrote about this! I loved it!

  • Holly Pheniabout a year ago

    You said it well. I'm glad to see a piece calling attention to something that affects so many people.

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    I think you described it pretty well. Well written and important piece. Well done.

  • Sad 🥹But a Very Good Piece❤️😉

  • You captured me pretty well. And yes, thank you for posting the crisis line number, though, since I live in the States, I'm not sure it's available for me.

  • Kendall Defoe about a year ago

    Splendid selfless signs surrounding stylish stanzas... And thank you for posting the info on the numbers and help available. ;)

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