I. BIRTH
Dawning was pretty
A rose without thorns
You burnt her city
Monster with black horns
She wouldn’t know love
until she was blue
A young broken dove
depended on you
Does it surprise you
She became a storm
Oh, does it scare you
the way she’d transform
You taught her to hate
Seclusion your knife
A dark twisted fate
War-torn with strife
Locked in a cage
A child alone
Singer with no stage
A dog with no bone
But now she’s a Queen
A warrior, proud
It’s time to be seen
It’s time to be loud
You poisoned her tea
each night before bed
Her heart once held glee
You wanted it dead
Reached for your hand
You tore yours away
The howling night band
never freed your wake
She now wears a crown
dipped in bright gold
She didn’t break down
Broke free of your hold
Oh, rosebud child
Her mouth sewn closed
Kept tame, never wild
Song never composed
A tall barred window
The ball down below
Hidden in shadows
Hateful with woe
Now a brush of flames
Cradle of fire
No longer tamed
You’re blind to dire
She was once a doe
Gentle and kind
But you were a foe
with your tortured mind
The ways of a snake
Learnt from a crow
Ten years of heartache
Started to show
A decade later
Monster in the flesh
Huntress, king hater
An angel of death
II. MACHINE
It’s not all so bad
This you would say
You read her stories
Your biggest mistake
For you didn’t see
You taught her to listen
Everything she’d be
you’d never christen
Now she speaks freely
Untainted by sin
Strong and carefree
Nightmare didn’t win
You, the black raven
King under the sun
This was no haven
No, this was no fun
Tore muscle from bone
Made sweet carrion
Filled her heart with stone
Blared the clarion
But she’d rise above
Her own warrior
No longer a dove
Now a strong soldier
Friendship, a rare gift
Your blood, a dark curse
Created a rift
Love born in a hearse
Never taught to hunt
Raised to be prey
Her blade may be blunt
but you were child’s play
Now she’s a fighter
Red hair in the wind
Flames grew brighter
An army of sin
III. DESTRUCTION
You made your mistake
Oh king, how you fell
You thought she would break
under your cruel spell
Twelve years have passed
No longer your bird
She grew to surpass
Learnt to be heard
She, the precocious
Labyrinth of fools
Young and ferocious
Words became tools
Shot them like arrows
Tension on the string
The archer, her bow
A storm she would bring
You took her selfhood
Once taught her to hate
She lost all her good
and rose to be great
It was ambition
that drove you to sin
Learnt from omission
Blood doesn’t make kin
She speaks and spoke loud
A strong lioness
Rose now a storm cloud
Bow to your highness
Fear is a poison
That you once preached
To quiet the noises
To disown her speech
A father, your own
In flesh and raw blood
You chose to disown
Your once sweet rosebud
Now she’s a woman
A woman I say!
Held back for no man
Goodbye, the dark days
About the Creator
Jordi M
Creative Writing graduate, specialising in film, politics, and gender and sexuality studies.
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This poem was beautiful. Birth is my favourite; so striking and heartfelt.