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Revenge Tastes Sweetest

When it's forbidden

By Cathy holmesPublished 7 months ago Updated 7 months ago 1 min read
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Photo by Jennifer Pallian on Unsplash

He said "forgive me."

I kissed him. I baked a cake,

with his closest friend.

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Cathy holmes

Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.

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  • L.C. Schäferabout a month ago

    Mmmm cake 😋

  • ThatWriterWoman6 months ago

    Ooof! Nice twist! Especially in such tight word constraints!

  • Paul Stewart7 months ago

    LMAO! Love your humour...seems like he deserves it though. Great piece, Cathy Canada Buddy!

  • Rebecca Patton7 months ago

    Quite petty. I like it!

  • Did it get left out in the rain? Or just his got left out? (You could have used Ex-Lax.)

  • Veronica Coldiron7 months ago

    Love it! LOL! 🤣😅🤣

  • Great work

  • Dana Crandell7 months ago

    The sweet taste of revenge. Well done, Cathy!

  • It's not even his Birthday 👀🎉😆

  • Moe Radosevich7 months ago

    Hummmm, did ya put on some icing 😂, good one Cathy 😊😊

  • Kristen Balyeat7 months ago

    Haha! He had it coming. Hope she serves him a slice! 😂

  • JBaz7 months ago

    Baked a cake with his closest friend….lol

  • Mother Combs7 months ago

    Great Senryu

  • Lol, the way my eyes bulged 🤣🤣🤣🤣 I loved this!

  • Test7 months ago

    ❤️❤️💕

  • Donna Renee7 months ago

    Oooh revenge is sweet for sure! 🫣😁

  • Babs Iverson7 months ago

    OMG!!! Good one!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Lamar Wiggins7 months ago

    Ooops! 😅 I guess the relationship is open now! lol.

  • Mohammed Darasi7 months ago

    🤣🤣 he deserves it

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