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Resurrección

The ultimate Eclipse

By Natasha CollazoPublished about a month ago Updated 2 days ago 1 min read
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Eternal damnation adumbrated over humanity;

concealing the soul of man from God. Until

love interfered tearing the veil in two, breaking the chains held

in place, of my shame, through his

pain.

Saving the entire human race. The barren grave reuniting man back to God

eternally. The ultimate eclipse, the stone that was rolled away.



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In honor of Easter Sunday, in the Christian faith the resurrection of Jesus Christ is celebrated.







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About the Creator

Natasha Collazo

**Studying Modern Journalism @ NYU**

Project: The diary of an emo Latina

I get inspired at the mid of night

Stock market by day, howler by night

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Inquiries: [email protected]

Instagram: @sunnycollazo

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  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsden6 days ago

    This was beautiful!

  • Jazzy 18 days ago

    WOW. JUST WOW. Yes I love how you pulled this into to the resurrection, so well done

  • Joe O’Connor29 days ago

    "The ultimate eclipse, the stone that was rolled away." great final line Natasha, and a clever way of taking on the eclipse concept! Topical for Easter as well. I like how this entry has used the light/dark imagery to reflect the idea of salvation.

  • Shirley Belkabout a month ago

    Amen!!!!! Truly the ultimate eclipse. So proud of you for writing this one :)

  • Alexis Wellmakerabout a month ago

    Beautiful!!💖

  • And for the first time ever, humanity stood in the shadow of the eclipse from that great stone & said, "At last I see!" And from somewhere deep inside the otherwise empty tomb where Satan deigned to claim their latest victim, a voice responded, "See what?"

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Oh Sunny, this was such a brilliant take on this challenge! You nailed it!

  • D.K. Shepardabout a month ago

    He is risen indeed! This is stunning, Natasha! “The ultimate eclipse” is such a beautiful declaration.

  • Andrea Corwin about a month ago

    Beautiful poem on the basis of Christianity.

  • Anna about a month ago

    I love the way you mixed the two events! Absolutely amazing!

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a month ago

    Loved every word of this! Bravo!

  • Novel Allenabout a month ago

    So fitting for the Easter season. Beautifully said Natasha.

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