Resistance
a barrier opposing movement / a movement opposing barriers (an inverse poem)
By Sonia Heidi UnruhPublished 3 months ago • 1 min read
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stop
it won't
make a difference
assume if you don't
have courage for the struggle
it wasn't meant to be
change is never easy
nobody is blamed
asking why
start
About the Creator
Sonia Heidi Unruh
I love: my husband and children; all who claim me as family or friend; the first bite of chocolate; the last blue before sunset; solving puzzles; stroking cats; finding myself by writing; losing myself in reading; the Creator who is love.
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Comments (5)
Well done!👏
So well done, Sonia :) This one really had an impact being read in both directions. Loved it!
Extremely well done, Sonia. Reading it down is situation normal. Reading it up is transformative.
Ooh! Very thought provoking. I like seeing how resistance is perceived by the speaker in both directions. In the first, the desire to change the world is resisted BY the world, so if your courage is lacking, then just give up. But in the second reading, it's the opposite. The bad will only continue; you have to BE the resistance. It's like the things that need to be changed are simultaneously the resistance AND the unstoppable force. What a cool way to view that word! This runs deep.
Loved it! Well done!