Relax Will Be the Last Word You Hear If You Don’t...and Drown
Millisecond swimming guidance
Mastery
via relaxation
into fluid states of matter
is a challenge to grasp.
To float ain’t easy for everyone.
Surrender body imprinted years of practiced contraction
to untold mysterious depths.
Shhhh knowledge diffused in w i d e e x p a n s e
able to deliver or drown you.
School you
on what respect for breath feels like without filters.
Struggle doesn’t serve you here.
Frustration irrespective of cause floats away.
Applied tensions extinguish life in seconds.
Tread water for a time.
How long before lactic acid build renders muscles non-functional?
*
Transferable skills.
*
Life on land a society of endless squalls.
Keep your head above freak waves of fiscal policy for beneath
currents cold
determine direction.
*
Adrenaline reserves spent.
Swallowed and spat out
by swells of rhythmic routine until it’s not
and massive clouds cower every place in you burdened by debt
and the damage democratically elected officials wreak at boat’s helm
with no intention whatsoever to stop
for overboard unfortunates
but accept online payment
direct debit
money order
and bank transfer any day of the year.
Additional shift overtime saltwater burns through your nose.
Lifelines exhausted.
Adrenaline reserves spent.
Sun near horizon.
Optimal shark feed times threaten.
Spirit sinking.
Tears more water taken.
This single resolution the most difficult.
RELAX.
Shut down and restart.
Relaxation
the
only
thing
to save you now.
Let go of your body
and become sky-filled buoyant soul.
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