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Raptor Raps

Velociraptor slam poetry

By Joe PattersonPublished 22 days ago 1 min read

Just in case you’re wondering, I’m not a rapper. I’m the carnivorous king of Jurassic Park, a velociraptor.

I don’t care what other predator stings in the jungle. I’m the meat eating king of the jungle.

I got a big mouth but when I get ready to start taking bites you might wanna start taking flight.

I’m a little big dude a few meters long. My teeth are long and when I’m hungry I’ll start eating long.

When it comes to mess with me ain’t no testing me. Most brutal-full in the jungle is T-Rex then me.

This Jurassic Predator is hungry snapped for raps. From the mic to the mountains I bring the raptor raps.

Song Lyricsslam poetry

About the Creator

Joe Patterson

Hi I'm Joe Patterson. I am a writer at heart who is a big geek for film, music, and literature, which have all inspired me to be a writer. I rap, write stories both short and long, and I'm also aspiring to be an author and a filmmaker.

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  • The Dani Writer21 days ago

    Good poem Joe! You're on a "Dinosaur Roll!" I've yet to even write my first.

  • Cathy holmes22 days ago

    Nicely done!

  • Sasi Kala22 days ago

    very Nice Joe.

  • You might have to start singing & recording these poems 🤔… With a name like velociraptor & his attitude… he’s a perfect fit to be a rapper 😆.

  • It is nice brother. Well done.

  • This was slammin'! I freaking loved it!

  • Carol Townend22 days ago

    What a brilliant and different way of writing. I enjoyed that!

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