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Rainy Day in the Car

Why did it bring so much comfort?

By Dharrsheena Raja SegarranPublished 7 months ago 1 min read
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Heavy rain

Parked car

No umbrella

Dinner date cancelled

You looked at me

From behind the wheel

I smiled

Your worry dissipated

Like cotton candy in water

Silence ensued

Tranquil and serene

We watched the raindrops

Racing down the windshield

Our fingers intertwined

Conversation bloomed

From feathers

To oceans

We talked about everything

You, me, and us

Our future

All worries were rainwashed

It was us against the world

You, my Sun

I, your Moon

Our future, the Earth

Hours passed

Rain subsided

Jokes started

Playful tugs

Gentle punches

World-forgetting laughter

Rain stopped

We got out

Couldn't stop smiling

A rainy day in the car with you

Brought so much comfort


Because it was with you

And it will always be you

I wished for you

For the rest of my life
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Dharrsheena Raja Segarran

I'm a Certified Nutritionist 🌱 and these are what I mostly write:
〰️ Fiction (Horror/Thriller)
〰️ Non-Fiction (Nutrition and True Crime)
〰️ Poetry

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  • Alex H Mittelman 2 months ago

    Wow beautiful poem! I wish for the same! 😀

  • Another beautiful one. You have a gift! I really enjoyed this one, it felt very real.

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  • Oneg In The Arctic3 months ago

    Just love this so much

  • Dana Stewart3 months ago

    Beautiful imagery, I loved this! So many powerful lines!

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  • I love this. It was such a beautiful adventure! I subscribed!

  • Gina C.5 months ago

    This was so amazing! So many lines I loved here. This is one: "Like cotton candy in water" and here is another "Conversation bloomed From feathers To oceans" Just GORGEOUS; a great poem, so many emotions!

  • Amy Writes6 months ago

    So sweet! You really captured love in this

  • Luna Lee Bear6 months ago

    That was very relaxing to read! 😍

  • Gideon 6ix6 months ago

    Wonderful- this made me reminisce on my experiences like this- thank you for sharing!

  • C. Rommial Butler6 months ago

    Beautifully written! "Like cotton candy in water" really evokes the gentility of the dissolution.

  • Emily Mainor7 months ago

    I loved reading this, absolutely loved the cotton candy line 💕

  • AbbieDrew7 months ago

    Such a beautiful poem! I enjoyed reading this so very much! Thank you for sharing!

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  • Jonathan Townend7 months ago

    Beautiful poetry - descriptive visually. Easily reminded me of moments like rainy car days😊.

  • Nani7 months ago

    This was a beautiful poem and I loved your imagery. Your poem reminded me of a movie and made me smile at the end.

  • Morgana Miller7 months ago

    Beautiful! You brought me right to this cherished moment with you

  • Ward Norcutt7 months ago

    Yes.. Rainwashed is a great inage. Thanks fir sharing this.

  • Rachel M.J7 months ago

    Aah, beautiful <3 particularly this line "All worries were rainwashed"

  • Kat Thorne7 months ago

    Lovely imagery, so calming!

  • Pam Reeder7 months ago

    I loved this phrase "Your worry dissipated Like cotton candy in water"

  • Sandra Tena Cole7 months ago

    This made me so happy! 💖

  • Harvey Elwood7 months ago

    I love the contrast between the disheartening "dinner date cancelled" and the healing "Your worry dissipated, Like cotton candy in water" - such a beautiful moment captured!

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