Rainy Day in the Car
Why did it bring so much comfort?
Heavy rain
Parked car
No umbrella
Dinner date cancelled
You looked at me
From behind the wheel
I smiled
Your worry dissipated
Like cotton candy in water
Silence ensued
Tranquil and serene
We watched the raindrops
Racing down the windshield
Our fingers intertwined
Conversation bloomed
From feathers
To oceans
We talked about everything
You, me, and us
Our future
All worries were rainwashed
It was us against the world
You, my Sun
I, your Moon
Our future, the Earth
Hours passed
Rain subsided
Jokes started
Playful tugs
Gentle punches
World-forgetting laughter
Rain stopped
We got out
Couldn't stop smiling
A rainy day in the car with you
Brought so much comfort
Why?
Because it was with you
And it will always be you
I wished for you
For the rest of my life
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Dharrsheena Raja Segarran
I'm a Certified Nutritionist 🌱 and these are what I mostly write:
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Wow beautiful poem! I wish for the same! 😀
Another beautiful one. You have a gift! I really enjoyed this one, it felt very real.
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Just love this so much
Beautiful imagery, I loved this! So many powerful lines!
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I love this. It was such a beautiful adventure! I subscribed!
This was so amazing! So many lines I loved here. This is one: "Like cotton candy in water" and here is another "Conversation bloomed From feathers To oceans" Just GORGEOUS; a great poem, so many emotions!
So sweet! You really captured love in this
That was very relaxing to read! 😍
Wonderful- this made me reminisce on my experiences like this- thank you for sharing!
Beautifully written! "Like cotton candy in water" really evokes the gentility of the dissolution.
I loved reading this, absolutely loved the cotton candy line 💕
Such a beautiful poem! I enjoyed reading this so very much! Thank you for sharing!
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Beautiful poetry - descriptive visually. Easily reminded me of moments like rainy car days😊.
This was a beautiful poem and I loved your imagery. Your poem reminded me of a movie and made me smile at the end.
Beautiful! You brought me right to this cherished moment with you
Yes.. Rainwashed is a great inage. Thanks fir sharing this.
Aah, beautiful <3 particularly this line "All worries were rainwashed"
Lovely imagery, so calming!
Naan sooriyan, nee vennilaa💕💕
I loved this phrase "Your worry dissipated Like cotton candy in water"
This made me so happy! 💖
I love the contrast between the disheartening "dinner date cancelled" and the healing "Your worry dissipated, Like cotton candy in water" - such a beautiful moment captured!