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Sleeping giant wakes.
Day turns night, life becomes death.
Pompeii never more.
Thank you for reading my first High-Ku. It was enjoyable.
Jason
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About the Creator
JBaz
I have enjoyed writing for most of my life, never professionally.
I wish to now share my stories with others, lets see where it goes.
Born and raised on the Canadian Prairies, I currently reside on the West Coast. I call both places home.
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Comments (10)
as Abigail has discovered, a haiku 's purpose is to capture/convey an image. yours does so and extends into a well-known story. this is a very good poem - especially for your first!
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The picture just added to your poem. I find that interesting- in this challenge, the images we choose seem more important because we can see them while looking at all the words of the poems!
Very powerful. Great job
Dark and moving!
Excellent! Very original.
Oh my. So much power in so few words. Perfect.
Absolutely fantastic!!!
Ih, wow! This is phenomenal
Now this is original. Well done.