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Make the whole

By Cathy holmesPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
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You fall to pieces.

You say you feel beaten. But,

I see your beauty.

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Cathy holmes

Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.

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  • Emily Marie Concannon2 months ago

    so sweet

  • Jess Boyes2 months ago

    Wonderful! I loved it ❤️

  • Brin J.2 months ago

    You pull on my heartstrings with your poetry. <3

  • Colt Henderson2 months ago

    Awesome all around.

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  • Madoka Mori2 months ago

    Fantastic imagery on this one. The image being the key to unlock the meaning is a deft touch.

  • Awww, this hit me hard. It was just so sweet!

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  • Daniel Jeyaraman2 months ago

    I am impressed, Cathy. Beautifully penned.

  • C. H. Richard2 months ago

    Beautiful visual and translates to so many things. ❤️

  • You are killing it!!!

  • Babs Iverson2 months ago


  • Love this💯❤️😉🎯🥰👍

  • Gina C.2 months ago

    Beautiful!! Well done, Cathy!! So uplifting and sweet at the end. ❤️

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  • Heather Hubler2 months ago

    That was deep. You used the title and sub-title so effectively, and then the haiku slammed home. Excellent, my friend :)

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