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Penny For Your Thoughts

Or A Dime

By Moe RadosevichPublished 7 months ago 1 min read
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Penny For Your Thoughts
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watching those grains of life,

pass,

thru the glass,

counting down your remaining time,

we give pennies,

for thoughts,

not me,

I want a dime!!

a penny’s worth,

doesn’t yield much,

but a dime,

gives something to touch!

and in this time,

over and over,

with rhyme,

my dime,

opens the door,

where want is for more;

and one thing is sure,

the penny thought,

will not have brought,

what the dime has begot;

so, watch the grains,

dare not glance away,

don’t be thieved of your dime,

when it’s only a penny,

you must pay!!

yet don’t ignore,

that open door,

or,

you’ll settle on a penny,

for your thoughts,

and nothing more!!

Thank you for reading, and I ask,

Penny For Your Thoughts??

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About the Creator

Moe Radosevich

I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you

Write on my friends

Sure would appreciate more reads and maybe some tips or pledges thank you

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  • Kristen Balyeat6 months ago

    I enjoyed this so much, Moe! Such a great flow and message!

  • Tiffany Gordon 6 months ago

    ABSOLUTELY ❤ it!

  • The Dani Writer7 months ago

    Oh, this is super clever!!!

  • Babs Iverson7 months ago

    Moe, this was a fun rhyming poem!!! Love it!!!

  • My thought was that you were gonna finish this poem with the ending line ghat they provided for the Arid Challenge! There you go! Where's my penny? No wait, I want a dime! Lol! Loved your poem!

  • Grz Colm7 months ago

    This was great with nice slick rhymes! But I never fully understood that phrase! Still don’t. 😅😆

  • Darkos7 months ago

    Should I pay ? or should I go ? maybe I should thought so ! Great poem ☺️!

  • Mother Combs7 months ago

    I think this is a great poem. Very well-written. I'm thinking what my next one will be. Maybe I should have gone with fajitas tonight because I am stuffed from the pizza we ordered. Think I'll watch the Boondock Saints tonight when my hubby comes in. The time change is this weekend, isn't it? I hate time change, grrr. Wonder if this is a dime's worth or not?

  • Cathy holmes7 months ago

    Hey, that was really nice. Well done.

  • Dana Crandell7 months ago

    Hmmmm... I wonder what a buck's worth would be. Interesting train of thought here, buddy.

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