Patience is a Virtue, But Not One of Mine
Every moment is a burden... I mean... "a blessing in disguise" by EMG 10/15/23
Waiting with a lack of patience
Sometimes I am like the overeager child
Who expects a grand gift
(Which is exactly what he is and will be)
Other times like the desert wanderers
After four hundred years of slavery
They get exactly what they want
But discomfort shapes those callous hearts
Really, what are forty years more?
Ungrateful, sarcastic, cynical prayers
Made completely in vain
Are my daily bread
Nine months
Plus two days
Plus how many more
Equals eternity?
I beg for the pain of relief
And complain when it starts
Hypocrite
Then the pain subsides
And I renew my vows
To bear the pain with dignity
Yet I never do
Is it time for tea again?
Three drops for thee
And none for me
Insomnia stabs
My aching body
Pleasure brings no repose
I’m too exhausted to sleep
I keep time on the exercise ball
I clean to break my body
I rest to learn to trust
But I resent to close my eyes
Or crack the spine
Of the Hours
The days
How many months have gone by this week?
Everyone’s hope makes me cry
Not a soul has seen my tears
I pine for the beauty of his cries
So many expectations for one so small
Already his name brands my soul
A part of me forever and I know him
Not
But doesn’t everyone have an idea
Of exactly who he ought to be?
In limbo, in purgatory, my identity
My baby isn’t born
I am still waiting.
About the Creator
Emily Dickerson
Hopeful and young, full of love. From my heart high praises are sung. For this reason I am here: to love and serve and bring all souls near. <3
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