Passion in Motion
Love Mode
Danger, love is directly ahead,
Intimacy rising like leavened bread;
Smiles speaking to the gazing eye,
Touching sensations, don’t be shy;
Reaching levels beyond the moon,
Ascending sensually, over a swoon,
Caressing gently, doesn’t take much,
Trembling at the slightest touch,
Invasion of a virgin soul,
Obtaining loss of total control;
Nervousness invokes a fidgety toll!!
Been somewhat sidelined lately with unforeseen and certainly unwanted events, some calm has returned so figured I’d give the latest challenge a challenge. Thanks for reading!!
About the Creator
Moe Radosevich
I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you
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Comments (10)
Beautiful piece, Moe. Well done.
So glad things are better for you! Loved your poem!
Nice one ❤️🔥📝😉💯❗
Good to see you back. Love can definitely be a distraction sometimes! Good one! 👍Hope things are alright on your end Moe.
Loved the poem and I hope the recent calm only grows
Glad to see you back, buddy! This is a great restart!
Welcome back and lovely piece to start with ❤️ Love that first line especially.
Loved your return piece! So beautiful :) Glad you're doing better!
So glad to have you back, Moe! I hope all is well ❤️ This poem is so beautifully done!!
Hope all is well, Moe. Glad to see you back at it with this sensuous poem that reminds me of first love! 💖