Photo by Tim Goedhart on Unsplash
Reaching for something to hold, shaky hands grasp empty space instead
edges begin to blur and shake, hazy and dim as colours fade to grey
the air is thick and heavy on the tongue: too harsh, too bitter, to swallow
whining increases, a dreadful buzzing, like the drone of a thousand wasps,
air struggles to be inhaled, along blocked nasal tunnels, suffocating the mind.
About the Creator
Joe O’Connor
New Zealander
English teacher
Short stories and poems📚
Please be honest- I would love your constructive feedback, as it's the only way I'll get better. Would rather it was pointed out so I can improve!
Currently writing James The Wonderer
Enjoyed the story? Support the Creator.
Subscribe for free to receive all their stories in your feed. You could also become a paid subscriber, letting them know you appreciate their work.
Comments
There are no comments for this story
Be the first to respond and start the conversation.