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pains of patriarchy

a poem

By Kayleigh Fraser ✨Published 8 months ago 1 min read

Crying alone in a mouldy cell,

stripped bare and impoverished, at the

familiar mercy of cruel command,

endowing control over what should

be her own, by dignity, by right.

Prisoner to the hand feeding her,

the mind unknowing whether she is

5, 35 or married again.

To her it's the same relentless pain.

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Kayleigh Fraser ✨

philosopher, alchemist, writer & poet with a spirit of fire & passion for all things health & love related 💫

“When life gives you lemons,

Know you are asking for them.

If you want oranges, focus on oranges”

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Comments (6)

  • ThatWriterWoman8 months ago

    There is a profound pain a woman feels in a patriarchy. I am glad that we are expressing it more. Brilliant work Kayleigh!

  • I wish I found a Genie. Then I can wish you back to the safety of your own home 🥺❤️

  • Hannah Moore8 months ago

    5, 35, or married again - excellent line in a great poem.

  • Babs Iverson8 months ago

    Upsetting!!! Amazingly written!!!💕♥️♥️

  • Joelle E🌙8 months ago

    Amazing metaphor. Love what u wrote about it being all the same no matter the age. ✨

  • Jazzy 8 months ago

    O I can feel the pain in this :(

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