long dwelt I, forlorn, in
the desert places, these
cruel desolation lands.
/
I blamed the cacti, the
sand-swept boneyards, in which
I made my shifting home.
/
far from the rock I was-
(there is a saying on
fools and sand); all the while,
/
a pale blue resentment
I purposely forgot-
I was the architect.
/
I manufactured the
desert, created the
emptiness, then blamed the
/
sky-enthroned One. Then, just
when the granules stuck in
my teeth, littered my hair,
/
abrasive confetti,
my eyes saw the tiny
giant truth; “alone” was
/
a lie. like a blood cell,
I move through my life, a
heartbeat of belonging,
/
almost-touching circles;
I the only constant-
but not the only spheres.
/
concentricity map;
love in Venn diagrams-
I learned love is lovely.
//
About the Creator
Chloë J.
Probably not as funny as I think I am
Insta @chloe_j_writes
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