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One Year

Goodbye for now

By Christopher O'SullivanPublished 6 months ago 1 min read
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Like a little whisp of smoke

It vanished in thin air

The little dream I had in mind

Was gone no longer there

And in it's place a new one

Before any time to mourn

A fantasy with flourish

Had shown up to be born

But what about the one before

Was it meant to die away?

Or should i return to it

On yet some other day?

Dreams may come and go

But do they really die?

Do they simply wait for us

To remember where they lie?

I like to think they linger

On the edge of every thought

Waiting for that moment

When once again they re caught.

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About the Creator

Christopher O'Sullivan

Poet, filmaker. Please feel free to check out my you tube channel https://youtube.com/@diofyproductions?si=eQKCpdk1asRf1G-g to see what sort of fun shorts i'm making.

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  • Dana Crandell6 months ago

    I believe they linger.

  • Eiman Asif6 months ago

    do read my this poem and let me know what you guys think about it: https://vocal.media/poets/time-s-not-letting-me-dream-xc2pa0uc6

  • Eiman Asif6 months ago

    lovely... nice one....

  • Really like the idea of dreams waiting around for us to remember them again. Well done

  • Yeap, it's always still there, never really fully dies. Loved your poem!

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