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One Serving or Two

Forever Young

By JBazPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
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One Serving or Two
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In natures kitchen

Squishy mud pies, children bake

Imagination

childrens poetry
14

About the Creator

JBaz

I have enjoyed writing for most of my life, never professionally.

I wish to now share my stories with others, lets see where it goes.

Born and raised on the Canadian Prairies, I currently reside on the West Coast. I call both places home.

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  • L.C. Schäferabout a month ago

    😁

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    Mud pies were the best! Cool on your hands. Congratulations on Top story too!

  • J. S. Wadeabout a year ago

    Lovely Haiku Jason. Congrats 🎉

  • Awww, this was so lovely and wonderful!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Lovely!!! Reminded of childhood memories making mud pies on the porch. ❤️💕😊😊

  • J. R. Loweabout a year ago

    Ah yes, I remember mud pies 😂. Nicely written!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Nicely done. I remember mud pies.

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