One day
4 letters or less poetry challenge. Entry #3
One day we will be aged bare and blue,
But we will be fine, aqua and true.
I wish to dive deep into you.
I want to rock with your soul.
Come here and take my hand,
And we will walk into the calm land.
Well, we don’t need to fear time.
Slit the rope, hold the ring.
It is time to walk and sing.
What do you want to be?
I see the lion in you. Or is it a bull?
Maybe I’m just so full
from all the love that you gave
I don’t want to stop this rave.
About the Creator
Chloe Gilholy
Former healthcare worker and lab worker from Oxfordshire. Author of ten books including Drinking Poetry and Game of Mass Destruction. Travelled to over 20 countries.
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Awesome!!! Beautifully written & loved this!!!♥️♥️💕
Oh this was so wonderful! Loved your poem!
Great entry to the Challenge 🥰
Don't halt 😊❤️👍💯📝😉💯Nice piece ❗