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On Your Hands
RE:SURGENCE; poems about mental illness
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If you were to spread
My pain onto your hands
What would you see?
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You might expect colors splattering
Blues and greys and vacant hues
Lacking vibrancy and reflecting
The sadness within
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But if this were sadness
Then why do your hands bleed?
Why do old wounds still remain
Their pale surfaces highlighting
Your weary skin and crooked fingers
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You might shout and claim
“This isn’t real!”
All the while you
Bandage every crimson channel
With duck tape and live wire
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If it’s fake, then why do I see
Encrusted in your nails the
Futile attempts at sanity and the
Desperate harm engraved to numb all other pain
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Now you will finally look up
Upon the life swaying precariously
The marks lining her arms
The hollows in her bones
The rose petals blessing her fingertips
And realize that your disbelief
Is on my hands
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This is the ninth poem in RE: SURGENCE, a poetry collection by Amanda Starks that shares what it's like to have and fight against mental illness in a free-form, lyrical prose.
Be aware that topics and themes may include suicide, self-harm, and isolation.
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About the Creator
Amanda Starks
Lover of the dark, fantastical, and heart-wrenching. Fantasy writer, poet, and hopefully soon-to-be novelist who wants to create safe spaces to talk about mental health. Subscribe to my free newsletter at www.amandastarks.com for updates!
Comments (1)
This one was particularly raw. I also sympathized with the fact that somebody will try and claim that it's 'in your head', I've been there. This is another powerful inclusion in Re:Surgence.