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The gentleness of the universe

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By Brian Wong Published 9 days ago 1 min read

The sun falls on my face

Treats the grass and trees, treats the snowy winter

Treats a person who lives in the cold

For a moment, I was loved by this universe

without distinction

This is a season of lingering thoughts

Mist spreads from the body

If you smell it deliberately

It should be the smell of a pine tree

Sweet and stable, rich and abundant

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Brian Wong

Hello, I'm Brian Wong , a 29-year-old aspiring writer dedicated to weaving captivating stories that resonate with the depths of human experience.

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