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By Heather HublerPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Blue is the color

Of silence at night, before

Shattering glass screams.

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Written for the blue haiku challenge.

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  • Veronica Coldironabout a year ago

    I don't know how I missed this one! It's awesome!

  • Thayrileabout a year ago

    Like it 😍

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  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    Sad especially this time of year with ice. Beautifully stated though. Love your work💙

  • Whoaaaa. You packed a huge punch in those few words. Excellent!

  • Donna Morgan about a year ago

    wow powerful and deep thank you

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Somehow so peaceful and full of terror at the same time; well done!

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  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a year ago

    Wow, let's your imagination soar with where that goes next!

  • Subhi Najarabout a year ago

    I love the power in it and the beauty!!! great piece

  • Colleen Millsteed about a year ago

    Wow a powerful story in minimal words. Well done Heather.

  • KJ Aartilaabout a year ago

    I have to agree - powerful! :)

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    Wow! pretty powerful Imagery. Great Job!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Wow!!! Powerful!!!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Whoa. That's a great piece. Well done. Love that last line.

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