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On the other side of goodbye

An inverse Hymn

By Natasha CollazoPublished 3 months ago Updated 3 months ago 1 min read
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On the other side of goodbye
Photo by Ian Cumming on Unsplash

One day,

this earth

will be a distant memory,

if a memory at all,

Where goodbye

Meets hello

an Angelic being,

Transferring to

His new body

Where sorrow can’t consume

no more

And fear is gone

Suffering,

You can taste and feel it,

A hymn of completion.

Alive,

Like a moving object.

Holding dear your beloved

The one who is suffering,

Angelic voices meet

for death will be so sweet

Like the upward rise,

strike of a chord

on a violin

sounding sharp,

the deep bounce

when fingers pull back

the sound of the harp

Where peace surrounds

And love abounds.

High up in the clouds.

Only because a King gave up his crown.

surreal poetryStream of ConsciousnessSong LyricsOdeinspirationalheartbreakGratitudeFree Verse
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About the Creator

Natasha Collazo

Werewolf Writer

I get inspired at the mid of night

Stock market by day, howler by night.

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Inquiries: [email protected]

Instagram: @sunnycollazo

Do all things in love

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  • Joe O’Connor2 months ago

    I like the gentle yet stirring messages in this one, and the ruminations on suffering. “High up in the clouds. Only because a King gave up his crown.” is my favourite bit. Nice😊

  • Beautifully composed no matter which direction you read it & wonderful expression of your faith, Natasha.

  • This flowed to well both forwards and backwards! Gotta agree with Invisi, I loved the bottom to top more!

  • Loved this beautiful piece. It read so well. My favorite was from the bottom up

  • sleepy drafts3 months ago

    This is so stunning. Beautifully woven, moving, and meticulously crafted. Gorgeous.💗

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