On the other side of goodbye
An inverse Hymn
One day,
this earth
will be a distant memory,
if a memory at all,
Where goodbye
Meets hello
an Angelic being,
Transferring to
His new body
Where sorrow can’t consume
no more
And fear is gone
Suffering,
You can taste and feel it,
A hymn of completion.
Alive,
Like a moving object.
Holding dear your beloved
The one who is suffering,
Angelic voices meet
for death will be so sweet
Like the upward rise,
strike of a chord
on a violin
sounding sharp,
the deep bounce
when fingers pull back
the sound of the harp
Where peace surrounds
And love abounds.
High up in the clouds.
Only because a King gave up his crown.
About the Creator
Natasha Collazo
**Studying Modern Journalism @ NYU **
Project: The diary of an emo Latina
I get inspired at the mid of night
Stock market by day, howler by night
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Instagram: @sunnycollazo
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Comments (5)
I like the gentle yet stirring messages in this one, and the ruminations on suffering. “High up in the clouds. Only because a King gave up his crown.” is my favourite bit. Nice😊
Beautifully composed no matter which direction you read it & wonderful expression of your faith, Natasha.
This flowed to well both forwards and backwards! Gotta agree with Invisi, I loved the bottom to top more!
Loved this beautiful piece. It read so well. My favorite was from the bottom up
This is so stunning. Beautifully woven, moving, and meticulously crafted. Gorgeous.💗