On importance of finishing the job
A not so fairy tale
Three chipmunks and a squirrel once
Ganged up to catch a cat;
"It is the cat that always hunts," -
They said - "And why is that?
Let's turn the tables and the tide,
Because in nuts we trust;
The cat may run, the cat may hide,
But stop that cat we must!'
It went according to the plan
Until the early fall,
The cat, surprised, has hid and ran
As rodents big an small
Had joined the fight to de-catize
The garden and the yard,
And fire burned in all their eyes
And many hides got scarred.
But then the weather cooled and nuts
Were getting hard to find,
And more and more what ifs and buts
Were aimed and reassigned;
FIrst went the chipmunks to their dens
To sleep and hibernate,
The squirrel tried to change the trends -
Too little ant too late -
Then rabbits ran as rabbits do,
Then mice have scattered off,
And groundhogs went home, too,
With fever, aches and cough.
As squirrel, tired and upset
Was hanging by a thread,
Who came along if not the cat
Who wasn't quite yet dead.
Its tail was thick, its ears were flat
Its claws as sharp as knives
Because - remember - every cat
Has six or seven lives.
About the Creator
Vadim Kagan
I believe that each day is a blessing, every story is amazing and all poems should rhyme!
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Comments (3)
Oooo, this gave me goosebumps! Fantastic job on this one!
Much to see here and so it is, very neat poem Vadim 😀
Mic. Drop. This type of story poetry is so hard to do and yours was such a blast to read! Hat's off to you, my friend 😄